tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post1602147510031643701..comments2023-09-20T07:30:02.175-04:00Comments on David's Writing Blog: The MaidenAgincourtdbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-63344121360533021312013-09-06T00:24:20.884-04:002013-09-06T00:24:20.884-04:00Oh wow! Unicorns. How interesting. Thank you fo...Oh wow! Unicorns. How interesting. Thank you for taking us to this fantastical place. Don't forget to come back to Trifecta to vote for your top three.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-48187591704693499802013-09-05T14:31:04.880-04:002013-09-05T14:31:04.880-04:00Thanks very much :-)Thanks very much :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-81354629993443390672013-09-05T09:23:13.718-04:002013-09-05T09:23:13.718-04:00Nice piece of writing. You held me rapt.Nice piece of writing. You held me rapt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-16341311801397296122013-09-05T08:25:25.726-04:002013-09-05T08:25:25.726-04:00I really like this. I prefer subtle fantasy to all...I really like this. I prefer subtle fantasy to all-out sci-fi. Well done!Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-282572054352672972013-09-05T00:36:00.440-04:002013-09-05T00:36:00.440-04:00Oh, after that it's all just care and feeding....Oh, after that it's all just care and feeding. ;-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-89740617609809809222013-09-04T23:41:19.011-04:002013-09-04T23:41:19.011-04:00I like the characters' interactions with each ...I like the characters' interactions with each other, but I can't believe you left it at a cliffhanger!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-2735211974956350442013-09-04T14:04:43.396-04:002013-09-04T14:04:43.396-04:00My interpretation of the myth is that the baring o...My interpretation of the myth is that the baring of the breasts is done innocently, as a gesture of... I dunno, supplication? Or maybe it's a'breast' = heart sort of thing.Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-78872294110524041612013-09-04T13:58:42.404-04:002013-09-04T13:58:42.404-04:00Nice short. Enjoyed reading it.Nice short. Enjoyed reading it.Ben Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985234897549353876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-86260665217994210512013-09-04T05:50:02.029-04:002013-09-04T05:50:02.029-04:00Ooh, now that's interesting - if a little naug...Ooh, now that's interesting - if a little naughty :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-54924274183464296502013-09-03T22:51:03.115-04:002013-09-03T22:51:03.115-04:00I'm so thoroughly debauched it'd probably ...I'm so thoroughly debauched it'd probably just run me through and then go on about its day. :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-57704386018871773162013-09-03T16:10:41.318-04:002013-09-03T16:10:41.318-04:00Nice! Oh to see a unicorn...Nice! Oh to see a unicorn...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-1747176061777406982013-09-03T13:31:39.257-04:002013-09-03T13:31:39.257-04:00I don't generally serialize things: I tend to ...I don't generally serialize things: I tend to think that defeats the purpose of flash fiction, which is to tell a self-contained story in a limited wordcount. I might return to characters or settings repeatedly, to tell individual stories, but I don't string stories out across multiple 'installments'. :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-42068624709038335292013-09-03T13:24:56.862-04:002013-09-03T13:24:56.862-04:00I was surprised by that as well, but apparently it...I was surprised by that as well, but apparently it's part of the legend.Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-15883526114264062972013-09-03T10:41:46.596-04:002013-09-03T10:41:46.596-04:00I'm not schooled in the ways of catching unico...I'm not schooled in the ways of catching unicorns, but it's interesting that unbuttoning her shirt was part of it. (It's be a little creepy to have the horse-like creature watching!) I'd love to find out if she does capture him!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-39139925163053082642013-09-03T05:27:00.837-04:002013-09-03T05:27:00.837-04:00Now you have piqued my interest-will have to go re...Now you have piqued my interest-will have to go read up on Unicorns:-)Don't know if this is a continuation (I was away for the last 3 months)but I do hope you are going to carry this story forward-would love to read more!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.com