tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post3262696876192477048..comments2023-09-20T07:30:02.175-04:00Comments on David's Writing Blog: MaskedAgincourtdbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-6119838562274730292013-08-25T19:15:27.465-04:002013-08-25T19:15:27.465-04:00There are more stories set in this universe under ...There are more stories set in this universe under the 'Association' tag. :-) And I'm sure I'll write more.Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-42361189821289918542013-08-25T16:14:59.760-04:002013-08-25T16:14:59.760-04:00Very interesting!!Are you writing more of this? We...Very interesting!!Are you writing more of this? We always need more great SyFy stories!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-53031984867471671622013-08-22T08:37:53.713-04:002013-08-22T08:37:53.713-04:00Thanks for reading and commenting :-)Thanks for reading and commenting :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-71662412589146473482013-08-21T17:53:48.339-04:002013-08-21T17:53:48.339-04:00The build-up had me on the edge of my seat. That w...The build-up had me on the edge of my seat. That was a clever trick. Thank you for linking up!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12700687481057612773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-34798308465565069742013-08-21T16:26:24.955-04:002013-08-21T16:26:24.955-04:00Thank you very much! :-)Thank you very much! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-86309685222492758282013-08-21T16:14:22.134-04:002013-08-21T16:14:22.134-04:00So much tension as that line moved. I love it.So much tension as that line moved. I love it.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-87301256196197314052013-08-21T03:39:27.084-04:002013-08-21T03:39:27.084-04:00Thank you very much. :-)
It's not really part...Thank you very much. :-)<br /><br />It's not really part of a longer piece, except in the sense that this the 'Association' is a universe I come back to a lot. Gotta love those post-alien-invasion dystopias!Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-20654172464310350042013-08-21T03:37:10.706-04:002013-08-21T03:37:10.706-04:00Thank you :-)Thank you :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-2327214179978839682013-08-21T03:36:04.462-04:002013-08-21T03:36:04.462-04:00IT works, by itself, though part of something long...IT works, by itself, though part of something longer. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-21373753013259380862013-08-20T21:04:52.113-04:002013-08-20T21:04:52.113-04:00"on a grafted piece of a dead woman's ski..."on a grafted piece of a dead woman's skin" - daaamn, what a great way to illustrate her desperation. Nice one David!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16956392147222800827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-21612614301029175792013-08-20T18:00:59.464-04:002013-08-20T18:00:59.464-04:00Thank you very much! :-)Thank you very much! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-15208265305471975732013-08-20T17:23:59.024-04:002013-08-20T17:23:59.024-04:00Ooh! Intriguing! Very well done. I thoroughly enjo...Ooh! Intriguing! Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed this.<br />Alicia Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00281607401060737431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-71952849366642123762013-08-20T13:21:45.385-04:002013-08-20T13:21:45.385-04:00I think she has a certain amount of fatalism bred ...I think she has a certain amount of fatalism bred by desperation. I also wonder whether she came by the skin graft 'honestly'; it's possible she could have murdered its previous owner to get it. There's lots of possibilities, which I like. :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-52992325054392569332013-08-20T13:19:00.381-04:002013-08-20T13:19:00.381-04:00Thanks very much! :-)Thanks very much! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-13757291815127299212013-08-20T13:18:53.415-04:002013-08-20T13:18:53.415-04:00This is eerie and very creepy. Marla is a very det...This is eerie and very creepy. Marla is a very determined character and I like how she will not let the woman behind her sway what she is doing. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-30944091400664523722013-08-20T13:18:35.871-04:002013-08-20T13:18:35.871-04:00I don't know; Possibly some sort of factory fa...I don't know; Possibly some sort of factory facility, or a transportation hub. It could even be where they distribute food rations. Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-40794199282700255542013-08-20T13:11:15.412-04:002013-08-20T13:11:15.412-04:00Ooo. Aliens, dystopian landscape, fabulous. I love...Ooo. Aliens, dystopian landscape, fabulous. I loved how quiet this was, her touching the brand, the whispering of their conversation the voice description of the Vylid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-81236635311612914292013-08-20T12:18:05.525-04:002013-08-20T12:18:05.525-04:00The suspense was a nice steady build. I'm glad...The suspense was a nice steady build. I'm glad the other woman didn't rat her out, but it makes me wonder what they are going into if the woman was trying to talk her out of entering.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16666910475457302786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-77270634545397500752013-08-20T02:57:29.269-04:002013-08-20T02:57:29.269-04:00Thanks very much :-) The woman in line behind her ...Thanks very much :-) The woman in line behind her was supposed to just be a way to ramp up the tension, but in the end I think she's an interesting character too, or could be if we knew more about her.Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-75675806130279132372013-08-20T02:56:08.525-04:002013-08-20T02:56:08.525-04:00I'm not sure whether this is Marla as part of ...I'm not sure whether this is Marla as part of a rebellion, or if this is Marla just trying to get by. Though, I think she'd have to have help to get the skin graft, and I've previously established in "Parole" that there *is* a rebellion going on at some point, so...Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-46454816900903832812013-08-19T18:57:02.187-04:002013-08-19T18:57:02.187-04:00That is quite interesting. She handled it pretty w...That is quite interesting. She handled it pretty well. Is it now going to turn into a conspiracy caused by Marla from within!? I wonder...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-22793742903698169782013-08-19T17:04:24.146-04:002013-08-19T17:04:24.146-04:00I'm not sure what hope the Human race has afte...I'm not sure what hope the Human race has after being conquered by the Association... theoretically they'd eventually reach Class C or even B status, after about a thousand years of doing the cheap manual labor. The Association is basically a big Pyramid Scheme. But it's gonna be a loooooong time. :/Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-78044074038579507952013-08-19T16:07:48.775-04:002013-08-19T16:07:48.775-04:00Yey, I'm not alone in alien Sci Fi, even if yo...Yey, I'm not alone in alien Sci Fi, even if yours holds more hope for Humanity than mine.DoctorMikeReddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07118605184091518364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-22690919863597597762013-08-19T14:27:05.712-04:002013-08-19T14:27:05.712-04:00Thanks. :-) Thanks. :-) Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-59964303090360150262013-08-19T14:20:05.232-04:002013-08-19T14:20:05.232-04:00Glad to see someone else did a futuristic/dystopia...Glad to see someone else did a futuristic/dystopian take on the prompt. Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com