tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post6465788840252074392..comments2023-09-20T07:30:02.175-04:00Comments on David's Writing Blog: SF Drabble #455 "In Darkness Let Me Dwell"Agincourtdbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-20380268102208404982015-02-13T12:53:19.697-05:002015-02-13T12:53:19.697-05:00Good use of the prompt and I like the conversation...Good use of the prompt and I like the conversational toneWhispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-74484026286549707752015-02-11T15:41:46.210-05:002015-02-11T15:41:46.210-05:00Yeah, I don't know where exactly I picked that...Yeah, I don't know where exactly I picked that up, it's fairly conventional. Better than clunky attributions about 'came the response through the crackling radio.' :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-70508011249971265622015-02-11T14:59:38.873-05:002015-02-11T14:59:38.873-05:00I like it. I also like your use of italics to sep...I like it. I also like your use of italics to separate identify the two conversing. Nice work.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-12848735519959904842015-02-11T14:19:53.480-05:002015-02-11T14:19:53.480-05:00Thank you :)Thank you :)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-88419902059481495132015-02-11T10:55:09.051-05:002015-02-11T10:55:09.051-05:00Devilishly good. Devilishly good. Velvet Verbosityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01565973367875825806noreply@blogger.com