tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post7261359874165969245..comments2023-09-20T07:30:02.175-04:00Comments on David's Writing Blog: The New Amsterdam Vampire Social ClubAgincourtdbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-85701996207229070262013-06-22T11:50:19.687-04:002013-06-22T11:50:19.687-04:00Thank you :-)Thank you :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-28902458538850579972013-06-22T11:26:02.251-04:002013-06-22T11:26:02.251-04:00This seems like a scene from a much longer work - ...This seems like a scene from a much longer work - I loved it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08420809700240691057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-9336812156583120832013-06-20T16:39:50.021-04:002013-06-20T16:39:50.021-04:00Thank you very much for reading and commenting :-)...Thank you very much for reading and commenting :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-69436927226655855492013-06-20T16:39:05.393-04:002013-06-20T16:39:05.393-04:00Thank you so much! :-)Thank you so much! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-555292235337400872013-06-20T14:11:40.156-04:002013-06-20T14:11:40.156-04:00wingman set aside I love the end particular... exe...wingman set aside I love the end particular... executive decision indeed ... Gunnar's a liability.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-23330729876315303302013-06-20T13:47:31.073-04:002013-06-20T13:47:31.073-04:00Ha, you scored with the wingman line so at the pri...Ha, you scored with the wingman line so at the price of being redundant I'll add that I too thought it was great. Writers can't always drop you into the middle of a story and have it feel like you've been with the characters all along up to this point, but you managed it seamlessly. Very happy to have read it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774305102518874220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-6221079787555974162013-06-20T11:52:28.866-04:002013-06-20T11:52:28.866-04:00Thanks for reading and commenting! :-)Thanks for reading and commenting! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-70279341859676944962013-06-20T05:30:05.056-04:002013-06-20T05:30:05.056-04:00Power plays among vampires... fun! Seems to be at ...Power plays among vampires... fun! Seems to be at the core of any club.<br />Also, Rocky's wingman.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-41841779985443088612013-06-19T04:19:18.644-04:002013-06-19T04:19:18.644-04:00Thank you very much!Thank you very much!Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-77919747895960173752013-06-18T22:26:36.569-04:002013-06-18T22:26:36.569-04:00Thanks! :-)Thanks! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-39366650988171336222013-06-18T22:19:05.371-04:002013-06-18T22:19:05.371-04:00What a group of characters heh Gotta love the conv...What a group of characters heh Gotta love the convenience of executive power...Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-13974942836229241652013-06-18T13:47:12.031-04:002013-06-18T13:47:12.031-04:00Thank you for reading and commenting :-)Thank you for reading and commenting :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-7151423778083323302013-06-18T13:46:55.079-04:002013-06-18T13:46:55.079-04:00Thanks very much :-)Thanks very much :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-72556924532600755012013-06-18T12:59:43.971-04:002013-06-18T12:59:43.971-04:00Ooh interesting take on the prompt! I like the use...Ooh interesting take on the prompt! I like the use of 'ensorcelled', and 'Gunnar is dust' especially. Kate (Trifecta Guest Judge)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-25711984872320413002013-06-18T09:14:17.084-04:002013-06-18T09:14:17.084-04:00Yep I add my admiration for the wingman line too. ...Yep I add my admiration for the wingman line too. Splendid work and brilliant atmosphere.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-90092910074973839852013-06-17T21:45:23.958-04:002013-06-17T21:45:23.958-04:00Thank you very much for reading and commenting!Thank you very much for reading and commenting!Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-46458279347711011832013-06-17T18:24:06.644-04:002013-06-17T18:24:06.644-04:00I also like this line: Low self-esteem is Rocky&#...I also like this line: Low self-esteem is Rocky's wingman. <br /><br />Cool take on the prompt! <br /><br />best, <br />MOVMOVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00782183723607923501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-59320113074339489842013-06-17T17:52:44.579-04:002013-06-17T17:52:44.579-04:00Thanks! :-)Thanks! :-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-20172553452776219412013-06-17T17:08:39.522-04:002013-06-17T17:08:39.522-04:00"Low self-esteem is Rocky's wingman."..."Low self-esteem is Rocky's wingman." Love that line! Very intriguing. Left me wanting to read more.Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-6292769158743937282013-06-17T15:27:38.077-04:002013-06-17T15:27:38.077-04:00It's from a prompt from http://www.trifectawri...It's from a prompt from http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/ The prompt was 'club', meaning as a bar or a social club or organization. I picked both. ;-)Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4416356209872338069.post-44913656462154111912013-06-17T14:15:54.263-04:002013-06-17T14:15:54.263-04:00nice! is this part of something longer? it's p...nice! is this part of something longer? it's pretty good - especially the first paragraph!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com