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Speeding down a deserted highway, late at night, at the very limit of my control; look in the rear-view. Fumble with the phone, auto-dial, wait in vain for an answer. Come on!
Try to control my breathing. Look in rear-view, again…
My heart was racing as I read this. I so want to know what happens next.
I also got a racing heart when I read this. Wonderful job creating such a dramatic scene with so few words. Well done!!
Thank you :-)
You have created great suspense here.
Thanks very much! :-)
A great take on the prompt. Loved the suspense you created.
Thank you for reading and commenting! :-)
Good one! I am on the edge of my chair... :-)
Don't fall off! ;-)
I'm wondering now, Headlights Police or Headlights ....disaster.
I'm reminded of the 'headlights' in Close Encounters... that weren't even really headlights.
Eeek!! I can only hope "they" is something good instead of where my imagination wants to go.
Somehow I really doubt 'they' are girl scouts with cookies... ;-)
Awesome bit of writing filled with excitement and suspense! ♥
Welcome to the gargleblaster, David, and to yeah write! We're excited to have you on board. Nice action packed little story here. :)
Thanks very much :-)
And you -- objects in the rear-mirror are closer than they appear... wooee
...and range is closing. dun dun DUN....
Drive faster! Liked this, David.
I wouldn't be checking my phone, I'd be getting the phark out of there! Great adrenaline injection, David!