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My Dear Harry,

I hope this letter finds you well. I have heard from Etheline — her young man is in Cairo with Alexander’s staff — that the fighting around Tobruk is heavy. Please don’t take unnecessary risks and remember that you have people waiting for you at home, chief among them Stewart who is certain that you shall marry me and thus finally provide the big brother he clearly deserves instead of merely the terribly disappointing sister who can’t even manage to throw a ball properly.

I have been moved up to shift lead at the plant, so I am even busier than before. Your mother brings me cakes at least once a week, and Penny comes across from the shop to have lunch most days unless they are too busy. She is becoming a good friend and I cannot wait to have her for a sister.

Please do tell me if there is anything more I can send. I am knitting more heavy socks and a smart blue cap which is almost done. Penny has some things for you too, and Stewart has with great gravitas — and, I think, selflessness — donated some of his hard candy.

I must go as my break is over, so this short letter will have to do for today. I will sit under the crooked Alder at the bottom of the hill tomorrow and write you a longer one, so long as the air-raid sirens cooperate.

Love always and waiting patiently,
Your Annabelle.

20 comments:

  1. what a beautiful snapshot of life through the words of this letter

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  2. It looks and sounds like a real letter. beautiful

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  3. Oh my gosh, the title is like the sting of the serpent's tail. :( Lovely write that is so skilfully set in the WWII era you made believable.

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    1. Names like that deserve to be stenciled on the nose-cones of bombers. :)

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  5. A wonderful story and a reminder that many women went to work during the war as the men were gone.

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  6. It hits me so hard in the chest to think how real this could have been. How many couples wrote to each other in war time...waiting...hoping...

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    1. Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad it made you feel something.

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